What are the main benefits of having regular family gatherings?
학생이 쓴 원문
Regular family gatherings improve communication and make it easy to understand each other and resolve conflicts.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Susan!
Great job! Your sentences are improving more and more. I think family gatherings are beneficial for families who are open to listening to each other. They can strengthen their relationships.
- T. Caitlyn
Regular family gatherings improve communication and make it easy to understand each other and resolve conflicts.
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>> OR: Regular family gatherings improve communication, making it easier to understand each other and resolve conflicts.
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