What do you think should be c[이름]ged in your community?

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I have been in the US many years and then I got back last year in Korea.

>>> I have been in the U.S. for many years, I got back in Korea this year.

There were c[이름]ged lots of things.

>>> There were a lot of c[이름]ges.

For example most Korean people are very polite that especially younger generation respect older generation part of our cultures.

>>>For example, most Korean people are very polite, especially younger generations respect older generations were part of our cultures.

Now days not anymore.

>>> Nowadays, they are not doing it anymore.
 Long time ago, from China called by to Korea “Country of the oriental courtesy.

>>> Long time ago, China called Korea \"Country of the oriental courtesy\".
 It was a great honor.

>>> Correct!

 Recently young people loosing their basic manner and etiquette.

>>> Recently young people are losing their basic manner and etiquette.
 So many young parents raised their own kid very spoiled.

>>> So many young parents raised their own kid to be very spoiled.
 The results was self centered.

>>> the result was that they become self-centered.

It was so sad story.

>>> It was a sad story.
 I can’t c[이름]ged this community right away.

>>>  I can\'t c[이름]ge this community right away.

Wherever I go I am trying to nicely and kindly.

>>>Wherever I go I am trying to be nice and kind.
 One day they will c[이름]ge better situations and better results.

>>>  One day they will c[이름]ge and there will be better situations and better results.
Keeping positive mind and keep doing it nicely.

>>>We have to keep a positive mind and do things nicely.