What is one thing that you think you will never c[이름]ge about yourself?

2018-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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I never thought about it that I tell you my story. I don’t want up my cloth size .Because it won’t look good also not healthy. I ‘m 5’10 weight is 48kg which is pretty good my age. When people go to the trip they eat more that way gain easily. I never eat snack as ice cream however my belly still flat. I have two sister both of gain weight compared when they were young age. Anyway I can self control easily. I drink lot of water and then exercise every single day. II do half marathon also sky diving. I’m very proud by myself. Every single corner hard working paid off.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]nah!

T[이름]k you for telling me your story. I am getting to know more about you.

See you later.


-Teacher Shelly-



I never thought about it that I tell you my story.
>>>I never thought about that but I will tell you my story.
 I don’t want up my cloth size .
>>> I don\'t want to add up the size of my clothes.
Because it won’t look good also not healthy.
>>> I won\'t look good and it\'s not healthy.
 I ‘m 5’10 weight is 48kg which is pretty good my age.
>>> I\'m 5\'10 tall and weighing 48 kg, which is pretty good for my age.
When people go to the trip they eat more that way gain easily.
>>>When people go on a trip, they eat more and gain weight easily.
I never eat snack as ice cream however my belly still flat.
>>> I never eat a snack like ice cream that is why my belly is still flat.
 I have two sister both of gain weight compared when they were young age.
>>> Both of my sisters gained weight compared to their weights when they were still young.
Anyway I can self control easily.
>>> I can control myself easily.
 I drink lot of water and then exercise every single day.
>>> I drink lots of water and I exercise every single day.
 II do half marathon also sky diving.
>>> I do a half marathon and I also do skydiving.
 I’m very proud by myself.
>>> I\'m very proud of myself.
 Every single corner hard working paid off.
>>> My hard work paid off.

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