What is one thing that you think you will never c[이름]ge about yourself?
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Hi, [이름]nah!
T[이름]k you for telling me your story. I am getting to know more about you.
See you later.
-Teacher Shelly-
I never thought about it that I tell you my story.
>>>I never thought about that but I will tell you my story.
I don’t want up my cloth size .
>>> I don\'t want to add up the size of my clothes.
Because it won’t look good also not healthy.
>>> I won\'t look good and it\'s not healthy.
I ‘m 5’10 weight is 48kg which is pretty good my age.
>>> I\'m 5\'10 tall and weighing 48 kg, which is pretty good for my age.
When people go to the trip they eat more that way gain easily.
>>>When people go on a trip, they eat more and gain weight easily.
I never eat snack as ice cream however my belly still flat.
>>> I never eat a snack like ice cream that is why my belly is still flat.
I have two sister both of gain weight compared when they were young age.
>>> Both of my sisters gained weight compared to their weights when they were still young.
Anyway I can self control easily.
>>> I can control myself easily.
I drink lot of water and then exercise every single day.
>>> I drink lots of water and I exercise every single day.
II do half marathon also sky diving.
>>> I do a half marathon and I also do skydiving.
I’m very proud by myself.
>>> I\'m very proud of myself.
Every single corner hard working paid off.
>>> My hard work paid off.
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