What is something that makes you feel excited or surprised?

These days, I have been fascinated about the universe. So, recently, I have been spending in my free time, I watching Youtube videos about the universe and space science. One of my favorites videos that I watched is \"Are there aliens in space?\" It talks about the possibility of extraterrestrial life in the universe. I hope aliens exist because if there are no aliens in space, humans are very lonely. And sometimes I wonder if living in the Earth could be a punishment from another world. also It makes me feel like I\'m just space dust. Overall, universe stories are makes me excited and it also helps me gain more knowledge.

Hello Jenna!

You have made absolutely outstanding progress with your writing, Jenna, and it is wonderful to see how confidently you are expressing such deep, fascinating thoughts! Your ideas about the cosmos are incredibly engaging, and you should be very proud of how naturally you used complex words like \"fascinated\" and \"extraterrestrial.\" Your use of the present perfect continuous tense in \"I have been spending\" and \"I have been fascinated\" is also a great high-level feature that IELTS examiners look for. To polish this paragraph and boost your grammar score, just keep an eye out for a few extra words that can accidentally slip into your sentences, such as the \"in\" in \"spending in my free time,\" the \"I\" in \"I watching,\" and the \"are\" in \"are makes me excited.\" Additionally, switching the preposition \"in the Earth\" to \"on the Earth\" and remembering to capitalize the word \"Also\" at the start of your sentence will instantly make your writing look more professional. You are doing an amazing job building your language skills, Jenna, and your ability to share such imaginative reflections is truly inspiring; keep up this fantastic momentum!

~Teacher Cathy

 

These days, I have been fascinated about the universe. 

>> These days, I have been fascinated by the universe.

So, recently, I have been spending in my free time, I watching Youtube videos about the universe and space science. 

>> Recently, I have been spending my free time watching YouTube videos about the universe and space science.

One of my favorites videos that I watched is \"Are there aliens in space?\" It talks about the possibility of extraterrestrial life in the universe. 

>> One of my favorite videos I have watched is “Are There Aliens in Space?” It talks about the possibility of extraterrestrial life in the universe.

I hope aliens exist because if there are no aliens in space, humans are very lonely. 

>> I hope aliens exist because if there are no aliens in space, humans might be very lonely.

And sometimes I wonder if living in the Earth could be a punishment from another world. 

>> Sometimes, I wonder if living on Earth could be a punishment from another world.

also It makes me feel like I\'m just space dust. 

>> It also makes me feel like I am just space dust.           

Overall, universe stories are makes me excited and it also helps me gain more knowledge.

>> Overall, universe-related stories make me excited, and they also help me gain more knowledge.