What is the biggest change you\'d like to make to your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I miss having a purpose in life, and I want to be passionate about something again. Without a clear purpose in my life right now, it feels like I\'m just drifting through each day.
I\'m sorry I couldn\'t focus on our phone call today because I was working.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Please do not worry at all about not being fully attentive during our call today! I completely understand that you were right in the middle of your work responsibilities, and your dedication to your job is always the top priority.You actually wrote your thoughts beautifully, and your sentences were grammatically perfect. It is completely normal to feel like you are drifting sometimes, but we will take things step by step and help you find that spark again through our lessons. Focus on your work for now, and we will connect fully next time!
~~Teacher Kate
I miss having a purpose in life, and I want to be passionate about something again.
>>CORRECT! This sentence is grammatically perfect!
>>OR: I want to find my passion again because I feel like I\'ve lost my purpose.
Without a clear purpose in my life right now, it feels like I\'m just drifting through each day.
>>CORRECT! This sentence is also grammatically perfect and beautifully written.
>>OR: Lacking a clear purpose makes me feel like I am just going through the motions every day.
I\'m sorry I couldn\'t focus on our phone call today because I was working.
>>CORRECT! (NOTE: That\'s okay, [이름] [이름]!)
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