What is the most memorable family vacation you\'ve every had?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is a family vacation that we went to Guam last November.
Because it\'s our first overseas trip where all of my family got together.
Of course, we went with my aunt\'s family, but it is meaningful that all of my family went on an overseas trip without missing. The travel period was short, but everyone had a good time and made many memories and wanted to go again, so it was all the more memorable.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you so much for sharing your answer. It was such a heartwarming experience you shared. ^^ I hope that you will have more nice travel memories with your family. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
It is a family vacation that we went to Guam last November.
>> It was a family vacation to Guam last November.
Because it\'s our first overseas trip where all of my family got together.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It was our first overseas trip with the entire family.
Of course, we went with my aunt\'s family, but it is meaningful that all of my family went on an overseas trip without missing.
>> We also traveled with my aunt\'s family, but it was meaningful since all of my immediate family members went on an overseas trip together without anyone missing.
The travel period was short, but everyone had a good time and made many memories and wanted to go again, so it was all the more memorable.
>> The travel period was short, but everyone had a good time, made lots of memories and everyone wanted to go again, so it was all the more memorable.
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