What is your favorite hobby and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite hobby is playing baseball. Because my dad was a baseball player. So I like watching baseball and I like playing too!. But my hobby isn\'t baseball player. I don\'t have my dream yet. But someday I will have a dream.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Aiden!
You did a great job sharing your thoughts about your hobby. I like how you explained your reason for enjoying baseball and connected it to your father. Remember that a hobby is an activity you enjoy, while a dream is something you want to become or achieve in the future.
Keep practicing, and I hope you discover your dream someday!
-Teacher Sonny
My favorite hobby is playing baseball. Because my dad was a baseball player.
>>My favorite hobby is playing baseball because my dad was a baseball player.
So I like watching baseball and I like playing too!.
>>I like watching baseball games, and I also like playing baseball.
But my hobby isn\'t baseball player.
>>However, I don\'t want to become a baseball player.
I don\'t have my dream yet. But someday I will have a dream.
>>I don\'t have a dream yet, but someday I will find one.
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