What is your worst travel experience? Where did you go? What happened during the trip?
학생이 쓴 원문
I traveled to Montreal with one of my friend last year but it ended up our relationship. it was 2night trip and the first day was great, but something happened second day. we visited to the famous church in Montreal and there was a protest in front of the church. After discovering the protest we started have conversation about politic issue and we found we have very different political views. We argued with each other and become awkward. After all, the trip was not fun anymore and we haven’t talked since that trip, so yeah, it was the worst trip of my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! That\'s such an unfortunate way for a trip to end. It\'s interesting how a conversation that started from something you happened to see during sightseeing ended up revealing a major difference in values. Even though the experience was disappointing, it sounds like the trip taught you something important about your friendship and how deeply political views can affect personal relationships.
~T. Jenna
I traveled to Montreal with one of my friend last year but it ended up our relationship.
>>I traveled to Montreal with one of my friends last year, but it ended our friendship.
It was 2night trip and the first day was great, but something happened second day.
>>It was a two-night trip, and the first day was great, but something happened on the second day.
We visited to the famous church in Montreal and there was a protest in front of the church.
>>We visited a famous church in Montreal, and there was a protest in front of the church.
After discovering the protest we started have conversation about politic issue and we found we have very different political views.
>>After seeing the protest, we started having a conversation about political issues, and we found that we had very different political views.
We argued with each other and become awkward.
>>We argued with each other, and things became awkward.
After all, the trip was not fun anymore and we haven’t talked since that trip, so yeah, it was the worst trip of my life.
>> Correct
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One of the worst trips I\'ve ever had was a two-night trip to Montreal with a close friend last year. At first, everything was going really well. We explored the city, tried local food, and enjoyed the beautiful atmosphere. However, things took an unexpected turn on the second day. We visited a famous church, and there happened to be a political protest taking place right in front of it. After noticing the protest, we started discussing political issues and quickly realized that we had completely different views. What began as a casual conversation gradually turned into a heated argument. The atmosphere became very uncomfortable, and neither of us enjoyed the rest of the trip. Unfortunately, that disagreement damaged our friendship, and we haven\'t spoken to each other since then. That\'s why it remains the worst travel experience of my life.
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