What lessons have you learned from past experiences?
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I learned many things past experiences, such as how to avoid mistake.
I could avoid tiny mistake now, from these experiences
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
I learned many things past experiences, such as how to avoid mistake.
>> I learned many things from my past experiences, such as how to avoid mistakes.
I could avoid tiny mistake now, from these experiences
>> Because of these experiences, I can now avoid small mistakes.
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