What’s the usual impression of others of you? How much do you value others’ first impression of you?
학생이 쓴 원문
People who get to know me at first usually describe my first impression as quiet and calm, and sometimes as non-threatening. Rarely, someone see me as sensitive and particular person, which is true. However, I think I am not that simple person who can be defined as one or two traits, like being quiet or kind. I have pretty complex and contradictory personalities, which is not easy to read at first. I am calm, but often hesitant. I like to stay quiet, but sometimes take the lead. I may seem harmless, but I\'m quite astute and not as naive as I look. When I was young, I was easily affected by and too concerned about other people\'s evaluations of my impression. As I grew older, however, I accepted my personality itself and became confident. Thus, I don\'t value others\' impressions of me anymore as much as I used to.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
You expressed your thoughts very well and gave a nuanced view of how impressions can change over time. Great work there!
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
People who get to know me at first usually describe my first impression as quiet and calm, and sometimes as non-threatening.
~ CORRECT.
Rarely, someone see me as sensitive and particular person, which is true.
~ Rarely, someone sees me as a sensitive and particular person, which is true.
However, I think I am not that simple person who can be defined as one or two traits, like being quiet or kind.
~ However, I think I am not such a simple person who can be defined by one or two traits, like being quiet or kind.
I have pretty complex and contradictory personalities, which is not easy to read at first.
~ I have a fairly complex and contradictory personality, which is not easy to read at first.
I am calm, but often hesitant. I like to stay quiet, but sometimes take the lead. I may seem harmless, but I\'m quite astute and not as naive as I look.
~ CORRECT.
When I was young, I was easily affected by and too concerned about other people\'s evaluations of my impression.
~ When I was young, I was easily affected by and too concerned about other people\'s evaluations of me.
As I grew older, however, I accepted my personality itself and became confident.
~ CORRECT.
Thus, I don\'t value others\' impressions of me anymore as much as I used to.
~ Thus, I don’t value others’ first impressions of me as much as I used to.
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