Which among your tasks at work do you like most and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite job at work is to support morning meetings.
In our company, meetings are held every morning, and since it is conducted with state-of-the-art computer equipment, I as a manager should check the equipment and help it proceed easily without errors, because every time I do that, I feel like a professional engineer and I feel most proud.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for sharing your answer to my question. ^^ You did well in sharing the task that you like most at work. I just did some corrections to make the sentences clearer. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
My favorite job at work is to support morning meetings.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My favorite task at work is supporting morning meetings.
In our company, meetings are held every morning, and since it is conducted with state-of-the-art computer equipment, I as a manager should check the equipment and help it proceed easily without errors, because every time I do that, I feel like a professional engineer and I feel most proud.
>> In our company, meetings are held every morning. Since they are conducted using state-of-the-art computer equipment, I, as a manager, need to check the equipment and make sure everything runs smoothly without errors. Every time I do this, I feel like a professional engineer, and I feel very proud.
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