Which is better, having many uncles and aunts or just a few? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like having many uncles and aunts.
Because I can get a lot of New Year\'s money.
And having a large family is nice.
강사 첨삭
Which is better, having many uncles and aunts or just a few? Why?
I like having many uncles and aunts. Because I can get a lot of New Year\'s money.
>> I like having many uncles and aunts because I can receive a lot of New Year’s money.
And having a large family is nice.
>> Having a large family is nice.
Having a large family sounds fun! Keep saving your New Year’s money.^^~
- Elly~
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