Which part of your childhood do you wish you could c[이름]ge? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to c[이름]ge my childhood of middle school life. Because when I think now, the middle school student don\'t have to study too much harder. But, I think that I studied harder and usually went to the academic. To play with friend or do various activities that help 5 sensitives is so helpful that I select the job that I want to be. If I can go to my childhood, I want to say for me \'Just play! And have a fun freely\'.
강사 첨삭
Hello Nicole,
T[이름]k you for answering your written homework. Continue practicing your writing skills. You did well today!
~ T. Demi ^^
T[이름]k you for answering your written homework. Continue practicing your writing skills. You did well today!
~ T. Demi ^^
>> I want to c[이름]ge my middle school experience from my childhood because now when I think about it, middle school students don\'t have to study too hard.
But, I think that I studied harder and usually went to the academic.
>> I think I studied way too hard and usually went to academy lessons.
To play with friend or do various activities that help 5 sensitives is so helpful that I select the job that I want to be.
>> To play with friends or engage in various activities that engage all five senses is so beneficial that I choose the job I want to pursue.
If I can go to my childhood, I want to say for me \'Just play! And have a fun freely\'.
>> If I could go back to my childhood, I would tell myself to \"just play and have fun freely.\"
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