Why are there diffrent seasons in some countries while others don\'t.

2026-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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The sesones diffrent to countrie is very far country is diffrent to the seosnes. South Korea is winter but, australia is sumer it is.

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Hi Jimmy!

This is your fourth revised composition from the past few weeks of homework. I appreciate your sending it. You can see the corrected version below. See you soon! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                           Why are there different seasons in some countries, while others don\'t?


The sesones diffrent to countrie is very far country is diffrent to the seosnes.
>>> Seasons differ between countries because they are located far apart and in different hemispheres.

South Korea is winter but, australia is sumer it is.
>>> For example, when it’s winter in South Korea, it’s summer in Australia.

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