Why do most people prefer to recive money as a parent?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most peopele is very thanks with parents. So many friends giving money for parents.
I want to giving money some parents.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your third revised composition from last week\'s homework. I appreciate your sending it despite your busy schedule. You can see the corrected version below. Enjoy the rest of your evening, Jimmy!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Why do most people prefer to receive money as a present?
I think the most peopele is very thanks with parents.
>>> I think many people are very thankful to their parents.
So many friends giving money for parents.
>>> Many of my friends give money to their parents.
I want to giving money some parents.
>>> I also want to give money to my parents.
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