Why do people lie even when they know honesty is valued?
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I think tried a lying is have a many money.but honesty is have a small money.
So honesty is a nice,but any people want to have a many money.
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Jean~~
Why do people lie even when they know honesty is valued?
I think tried a lying is have a many money.but honesty is have a small money.
>>> I think people lie because they believe dishonesty can bring them more money, while honesty often brings less.
So honesty is a nice,but any people want to have a many money.
>>> Honesty is good, but many people still choose wealth over truth.
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