Would you rather have a long summer break or many short breaks?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m more want many short breaks because many breaks is very happy for me.
But, I like long summer breaks.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your revised composition from last week\'s homework. You can see the corrected version below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Would you rather have a long summer break or many short breaks?
I\'m more want many short breaks because many breaks is very happy for me.
>>> I would prefer many short breaks because frequent breaks make me very happy.
But, I like long summer breaks.
>>> OR: However, I also enjoy long summer breaks.
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