Writing task: What do you like better, books or movies? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think movies are better than books. Because movies are very fun so there can give advice than books. But it is my think. So some people think books are better than movies.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Aiden! Good job expressing your opinion! Next time, try to add more details or examples to explain why you think movies are better. This will make your answer stronger and more interesting.
-Teacher Sonny
I think movies are better than books. Because movies are very fun so there can give advice than books.
>>I think movies are better than books because movies are more fun and can give advice in an enjoyable way.
But it is my think.
>>However, this is just my opinion.
So some people think books are better than movies.
>>Some people think books are better than movies.
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