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2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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tell me one of your best memories with your brothers or sisters. answer: I have an older and younger sister. I have not forgotten the best memories. We were talking and playing very happily When we adopted one dog. When we did not get our dog, we did not usually paly each other. But since we adopted a dog, we had many topics to talk and fun. Now, we are very close and like best friends. Have you ever given a false excuse to get out of something you didn't want to do? If so, tell me about it. yes I have, my father was birthday. but my sisters and me wanted to prepare to celebrate for him. we told father that we quarrelled each other and we will go out home right now. finally he came home from work so fast. and we made a party for him at home.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sending a composition. ^^

I have already sent the corrections to your first composition via Skype, as requested.

I appreciate your efforts!

Here are some corrections to your second composition.

See you in class!

~~t. Ally

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yes I have, my father was birthday.

>> Yes I have, when it was my father\'s birthday.

but my sisters and me wanted to prepare to celebrate for him.

>> My sisters and I wanted to prepare a surprise celebration for him.

we told father that we quarrelled each other and we will go out home right now.

>> We told my father that the 3 of us got into a quarrel and that we would leave the house immediately.

finally he came home from work so fast.

>> He went home from work so fast.

and we made a party for him at home.

>> And we surprised him with a party at home.

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