레스토랑 방문 후 감사 편지

2019-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear, Sir of Madam I am writing to appreciate about my unforgetable momories. Last Saturday was my friend [이름]\'s birthday. I searched the Internet to celebrate it. I was looking for the restaurant that have variety and special menu. So I could find yours. It was the his 30th birthday and I wanted to give the special monent for him. Actually, we do not spesk English well. But the waiter explained slowly and kindly. We ordered by your recommendation. Before enjoy the steak and the pastas, suddenly turn off the light and all of the waiters and the managers sang the celebration song. We felt comportable and satisfied. Someday, I would like to visit your restaurant again. I would be gratful if yours could inform about another events. Your faithfully. Yun Seong Woo

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. This is actually pretty nice that restaurants would make their guests feel special on a special day. I wonder if they asked for a big tip though. Hahah.

- T. Beth

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Dear, Sir of Madam
>>> Dear Sir or Ma\'am.
I am writing to appreciate about my unforgetable momories.

>>> I am writing to express my appreciation about my unforgettable memories.

Last Saturday was my friend [이름]\'s birthday.

>>> correct.

I searched the Internet to celebrate it.

>>> correct.

>>> OR: I searched online where to celebrate it.
I was looking for the restaurant that have variety and special menu.

>>> I was looking for restaurants that have variety and special menu.

So I could find yours.

>>> correct.
It was the his 30th birthday and I wanted to give the special monent for him.

>>> It was the his 30th birthday and I wanted to give a special moment to him.

Actually, we do not spesk English well.

>>> Actually, we do not speak English well.

But the waiter explained slowly and kindly.

>>> correct.
We ordered by your recommendation.

>>> correct.

Before enjoy the steak and the pastas, suddenly turn off the light and all of the waiters and the managers sang the celebration song.

>>> Before enjoying the steak and the pastas, the lights suddenly went off and all of the waiters and the managers sang the birthday song.

We felt comportable and satisfied.

>>> We felt comfortable and satisfied.

Someday, I would like to visit your restaurant again.

>>> correct.
I would be gratful if yours could inform about another events.

>>> I would be grateful if you could inform us about another events.

Your faithfully.

>>> Yours faithfully,

Yun Seong Woo

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