삼겹살
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you know 삼겹살(samgyeopsal)????
There are many pork restaurants near my house.
In Korea, samgyeopsal is very popular and common food.
And it is very delicious.
When adults meet their old friends or colleague,
they usually eat samgyeopsal with alcoholic drinks.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ssun!
I have definitely tried samgyeopsal.
It\'s one of my favorites.
Let\'s talk more about it in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Do you know 삼겹살(samgyeopsal)????
>> Have you heard about samgyeopsal)?
There are many pork restaurants near my house.
>> Correct
In Korea, samgyeopsal is very popular and common food.
>> In Korea, samgyeopsal is a very popular and common food.
And it is very delicious.
>> It is very delicious.
When adults meet their old friends or colleague, they usually eat samgyeopsal with alcoholic drinks.
>> When adults meet their old friends or colleagues, they usually eat samgyeopsal and drink alcohol.
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