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학생이 쓴 원문
Say something about a failure you experienced in not less than 5 sentences.
When I didn't make it to the college of my choice, I decided to study and prepare to apply next year. I had to study one more year to enter the university. However, it was unfruitful of result. I failed Korea University entrance examination.. Therefore I had no choice but to enter the university that I didn't want. I really felt miserable, but I could taste the bitters of life.
강사 첨삭
Happy happy Friday to you, Sung Hoon.
I know how important the education for every student, but more importantly the university that you are going to enter. I, myself, consider the reputation of the university where I\'m going to study.
I know you can make it because I can sense how much diligence you put into studying. Ajah!! You can do that!
~~T. Jamie^^
When I didn\'t make it to the college of my choice, I decided to study and prepare to apply next year.
>> When I didn\'t make it to the college of my choice, I decided to study and prepared to apply in my preferred university next year.
I had to study one more year to enter the university.
>> CORRECT
OR:
>> I have to study another year to enroll in the university.
However, it was unfruitful of result.
>> However, the result was unfruitful.
OR:
>> The result did not come to fruition.
I failed Korea University entrance examination..
>> I failed the Korean University entrance examination.
Therefore I had no choice but to enter the university that I didn\'t want.
>> CORRECT
I really felt miserable, but I could taste the bitters of life.
>> I really felt miserable, and I could feel the bitterness in life.
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