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What is your favorite holiday? Has your favorite holiday changed since you were a kid? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
My favorite holiday is the christmas since i were a kid. On christmas, everywhere truns festival place. I can hear christmas songs in the street and see many beautiful christmas trees. people feel happy on christmas. and It dosen't matter they are christion or not.
thank you for reading~ bye^^
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Hi Elly!
Thank you for sending this in and for doing your homework. Please keep up the good work. :)
~Kelly^^
What is your favorite holiday? Has your favorite holiday changed since you were a kid? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. My favorite holiday is the christmas since i were a kid.
>> Since I was a kid, my favorite holiday is Christmas.
On christmas, everywhere truns festival place.
>> On Christmas, it feels like there is festival everywhere we go.
I can hear christmas songs in the street and see many beautiful christmas trees.
>> I can hear Christmas songs on the street and see many beautiful Christmas trees.
people feel happy on christmas.
>> People feel happy on Christmas.
and It dosen\'t matter they are christion or not.
>> And it doesn\'t matter whether they are Christians or not.
thank you for reading~ bye^^
thank you for reading~ bye^^
>> Thank you for reading. Bye!
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