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QUESTION: Are people better off if they do not listen to criticism? Plan and write an essay of not more than 10 sentences in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations
in my opinion, we have to listen to criticism. sometimes we don't know ourselves direstly and objectively. So we usually generous only ourselves. Sometimes other poeple's view may correct. especially if many people say same criticism about ourselves, we should acceept their saying.
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Hi, Ms. [Name]!
This is your second essay. Way to go! ^_^
Thank you for diligently writing it.
I think we should be objective about everything.
We should use criticisms as a way to grow and improve.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you on Monday. ^_^
~Teacher Charry :)
in my opinion, we have to listen to criticism. >> In my opinion, we have to listen to criticism/s.
sometimes we don\'t know ourselves direstly and objectively.
>> Sometimes we don\'t know ourselves directly and objectively. (Note: Don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of the first word in your sentences. ^^)
So we usually generous only ourselves.
>> So we are usually generous only to ourselves.
Sometimes other poeple\'s view may correct.
>> Sometimes, other people\'s view may be correct.
especially if many people say same criticism about ourselves, we should acceept their saying.
>> This is especially true. If many people say the same criticism about us then we should accept it.
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