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the food had made in Korea along time ago
>> The food was made in Korea a long time ago.
we often eat it
>> We often eat it.
this is the food that i like
>> This is the food that I like.
my hubby is better than me
>> My hubby is better than me.
it was made of bean and it has too bad smell
>> It is made up of bean and it has this bad smell too.
if we are having it, the smell is full in all the room
>> If we eat it, you can smell it in the whole room.
if we are having it in winter, it will be delicious
>> If we have it during Winter time, its more delicious.
what is the food?
>>correct
cheonggukjang
>>correct
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