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2018-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Quiz We use a this when go up and when go down This doesn't work sometimes It says it's out of service then, we have to take the stairs all the way up until 15f It is not lucky It's so hot it is a lot of sweat ang annoying We wish to fix it quickly What is this? elevator

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Hi Anny^^


Thank you for letting me help you :) I appreciate all your efforts...\\m/...


T. Lainey <\',)))><


We use a this when go up and when go down

>> We use this to go up and down a building.
This doesn\'t work sometimes

>> Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn\'t.
It says it\'s out of service

>> Sometimes it says, its out of service.
then, we have to take the s

tairs all the way up until 15f

>> And if that\'s the case we have to take the stairs up until the 15th floor.
It is not lucky

>> It\'s not lucky.
It\'s so hot it is a lot of sweat ang annoying

>> It makes people sweat a lot and it is very annoying.
We wish to fix it quickly

>> We wish that they will be able to fix it quickly.
What is this?

>> correct
elevator

>> correct

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