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2018-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Quiz We need to work everyday then we can get it for a month when we get it, we are so happy If we wil get it we are having danner and buy a clothes and give some allowance to my son It is good that a lot than small This one is small happy fou us What is it? salarly money

강사 첨삭

Hi Anny^^


Thank you for letting me help you with your composition. I appreciate your effort.


T. Lainey <\",)))><


We need to work everyday then we can get it for a month

>> We need to work everyday so that we can get something in a months time.
 when we get it, we are so happy

>> When we get it, we feel so happy.
If we wil get it we are having danner and buy a clothes

>> If we get this, we can have dinner or we can buy clothes.
 and give some allowance to my son

>> We can also give this as an allowance.

 It is good that a lot than small

>> It is better to have more.
 This one is small happy fou us

>> But even if it is small, it still makes us happy.


 What is it?

>> correct


 salarly money

>> salary money

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