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Hi Anny^^
Thank you for letting me help you with your composition. I appreciate your effort.
T. Lainey <\",)))><
We need to work everyday then we can get it for a month
>> We need to work everyday so that we can get something in a months time.
when we get it, we are so happy
>> When we get it, we feel so happy.
If we wil get it we are having danner and buy a clothes
>> If we get this, we can have dinner or we can buy clothes.
and give some allowance to my son
>> We can also give this as an allowance.
It is good that a lot than small
>> It is better to have more.
This one is small happy fou us
>> But even if it is small, it still makes us happy.
What is it?
>> correct
salarly money
>> salary money
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