[이름]
학생이 쓴 원문
I think, smart phones make communication easyly, fastly and
conviniently
Before using smart phones We must search public phones to call, If we are not at home.
And we can input phone numbers in the smart phone now, but in the past we
must memo or remember phone numbers
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]! :)
Thank you so much for this. I definitely agree with your opinion. :)
See you in class!
- T. Rina ^^
1. I think, smart phones make communication easyly, fastly and conviniently
>> I think smart phones make communication easier, faster and more convenient.
>> I think smart phones make communication easier, faster and more convenient.
2. Before using smart phones We must search public phones to call, If we are not at home.
>> Before smart phones, we used and searched for public phones to call if we are not at home.
>> Before smart phones, we used and searched for public phones to call if we are not at home.
3. And we can input phone numbers in the smart phone now, but in the past we must memo or remember phone numbers
>> And we can input phone numbers in the smart phone now, but in the past we must put them on a memo or remember them.
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