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2018-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Stress affects our body and soul. Nowadays most people are exposured stress surroundings. The most of stress is mental strees. Mental stress affects our body health. In my case, when my students have exam term, I am stressed very much. At that time, I can't feel taste sense and everything is very bothersome. That time, my husband is afraid of me. After the exam ending, peace comes.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]^^

Thank you very much for doing your homework~

I think stress is a normal part of our lives, so controlling it well is crucial :)

Have a great day!

Stress affects our body and soul.
>>CORRECT!
Nowadays most people are exposured stress surroundings.
>>
Nowadays ,most people are exposured stress surroundings.
The most of stress is mental strees.
>>The common type of stress is mental stress.

Mental stress affects our body health.
>>CORRECT!
In my case, when my students have exam term, I am stressed very much.
>>
In my case, when my students have a term exam, I am stressed very much.
At that time, I can\'t feel taste sense and everything is very bothersome.
>>CORRECT!
That time, my husband is afraid of me.
>>CORRECT!
After the exam ending, peace comes.

>>After the exam, peace comes.

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