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I think stress is a normal part of our lives, so controlling it well is crucial :)
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Stress affects our body and soul.
>>CORRECT!
Nowadays most people are exposured stress surroundings.
>>Nowadays ,most people are exposured stress surroundings.
The most of stress is mental strees.
>>The common type of stress is mental stress.
Mental stress affects our body health.
>>CORRECT!
In my case, when my students have exam term, I am stressed very much.
>>In my case, when my students have a term exam, I am stressed very much.
At that time, I can\'t feel taste sense and everything is very bothersome.
>>CORRECT!
That time, my husband is afraid of me.
>>CORRECT!
After the exam ending, peace comes.
>>After the exam, peace comes.
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