[이름]mework

2018-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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Hello. T.Gracelyn I was completed my [이름]mework. Would you check this? 1. Please [이름]ld on while I transfer you to the Sales Department. 2. Somebody broke out last night and stole our TV. 3. They were giving on free perfume samples at the department store. 4. Joe made up a story about why we were late. 5. We ran out of shampoo so I had to wash my hair with soap. 6. It's too dark in here. Let's turn some lights on. 7. Our plan worked up fine. 8. My boyfriend and I broke out before I moved to America. 9. I have to hand out my essay by Tuesday. 10. Two men in black masks held the bank in this morning.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you very much. Take note of the corrections.
I will see you later. 
T. Gracelyn

1. Please [이름]ld on while I transfer you to the Sales Department.
>>correct
2. Somebody broke out last night and stole our TV.
>>Somebody broke in last night and stole our TV.
3. They were giving on free perfume samples at the department store.
>>They were giving out free perfume samples at the department store.
4. Joe made up a story about why we were late.
>>correct
5. We ran out of shampoo so I had to wash my hair with soap.
>>correct
6. It\'s too dark in here. Let\'s turn some lights on.
>>correct
7. Our plan worked up fine.
>>Our plan worked out fine.
8. My boyfriend and I broke out before I moved to America.
>>My boyfriend and I broke up before I moved to America.
9. I have to hand out my essay by Tuesday.
>>I have to hand in my essay by Tuesday.
10. Two men in black masks held the bank in this morning.
>>Two men in black masks held the bank up this morning.

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