[이름]mework
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Hi~ Teacher
This is [이름]mework of last class. Check it please.
What is more important to take care of: mental health or physical health?
A: I think that is mental health surely. Mind can control own body, So mental is healthy then body is healthy.
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Hello [이름], thank you for doing your [이름]mework. Keep it up! ^_^
I think that is mental health surely.
>>>I think mental health is more important to take care of.
Mind can control own body, So mental is healthy then body is healthy.
>>>Mind can control our body, so when the mind is healthy, then body is healthy.
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