[이름]mework

2019-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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Hi~ Teacher It\'s a [이름]mework. I\'m happy if you check it Would you rather go to a place where there are a lot of people or to a place where there are few people? Why? A: Of course, It is different to case by case. I usually prefer to go to a place of few people why I don\'t like to related of unkown people. But, If I need a help by emergency situation, then I want to go to a place where there are a lot of people.

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Great job, [이름]. Thank you for doing your [이름]mework. I\'m happy to check it for you. See you next week. ^_^

Of course, It is different to case by case.
>>>Of course, it depends on the situations.
 I usually prefer to go to a place of few people why I don\'t like to related of unkown people.
>>>  I usually prefer to go to a place where there are few people because I don\'t like to relate to unknown people.
But, If I need a help by emergency situation, then I want to go to a place where there are a lot of people.
>>> But, If I need help in emergency situations, then I want to go to a place where there are a lot of people.

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