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Q: Many people think that money promotes happiness. What importance does money have regarding happiness?
A: I think the money is necessary to live like human being. Especialy, the money can to come someone\'s desire.
But It is not everyone\'s case.
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Good afternoon, [이름]. Thank you for taking the time to make your [이름]mework. It would be a good practice for your grammar and writing skills. Keep it up!^^
I think the money is necessary to live like human being.
>>> I think money is necessary to live the human life.
Especialy, the money can to come someone\'s desire.
>>> Especially, money can come to someone\'s desire.
But It is not everyone\'s case.
>>>But that is not the case for everyone.
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