[이름]mework

2020-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

학생이 쓴 원문

It\'s my opinion about what you asked me. Q: What are the things in your life that you want to accomplish as soon as possible? A: I have a lot of thing to accomplish. If I have to c[이름]ose what I can accomplish as soon as possible, I want to communicate well in english with co-worker like a native speaker.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Chul. Thank you for answering your [이름]mework. It\'s a good practice for your writing and grammar skills. Keep it up!^_^

I have a lot of thing to accomplish. 
>>> I have a lot of things to accomplish. 
If I have to c[이름]ose what I can accomplish as soon as possible, I want to communicate well in english with co-worker like a native speaker.
>>> If I have to c[이름]ose what I can accomplish as soon as possible, I want to communicate well in English with my co-workers like a native speaker.

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