[이름]mework
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It is my opinion about what you asked me. Pleas check this.
Q: Which do you enjoy more: earning money or spending money? Why?
A: My opinion is very firm. it is spending money. Because, earning money is for spending money. Why people want money, It is get everything. So result is spending. It is simple!
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for your effort. I\'m happy to check your [이름]mework. ^_^
It is my opinion about what you asked me. Pleas check this.
>>>This is my opinion about what you asked me. Please check this.
it is spending money. Because, earning money is for spending money.
>>> It is spending money because you are earning money to spend it.
Why people want money, It is get everything.
>>>Why people want money is for them to buy anything.
So result is spending.
>>> So, the result is spending money.
OR>>>So, I enjoy spending money than earning it.
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