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Q: S[이름]uld people just accept whatever comes there way? Why or why not?
A: I think they s[이름]uldn\'t just accept whatever comes and Nobody don\'t just accept that.
Because, People want to control themselves own way and they try to acheive thier happiness.
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this is my [이름]mework what you required me. Pls check it.
>>> This is my [이름]mework and what you asked me. Please check it.
I think they s[이름]uldn\'t just accept whatever comes and Nobody don\'t just accept that.
>>> I think they s[이름]uldn\'t just accept whatever comes their way and nobody doesn\'t like to just accept that.
Because, People want to control themselves own way and they try to acheive thier happiness.
>>>It\'s because people want to control themselves, in their own way and try to achieve their own happiness.
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