[이름]\'s Diary

Good evening, [이름]!

I appreciate it that you submitted your entry for your diary.

I\'m glad that you had  a wonderful day at school earlier.

Having wonderful friends and teachers are really nice.

I hope and wish that you\'ll have a wonderful school year. ^^

~Teacher Gina

Hi I am [이름]!!

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: Hi, my name is [이름]!

 I went to school today.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I attended school today.

 I\'m beome second grade in middle school.

>> I became a second grade student in middle school.

>> Or: I\'m now a second grade middle school student.

 I met new friends and new teachers.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I was able to meet new friends and new teachers.

 My friends are kind and my teachers are very fun.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: My friends are nice and my teachers are very fun.

 I\'m happy because I go to middle school after along times.
>> I\'m happy because I go to middle school now after a long time.

 I want to make many friends to come.

>> I want to make many friends.

>> Or: I want to have many friends.