[이름]\'s Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your entry today for your diary.
I\'m glad that today was a better day for you.
You\'re a friendly person so I believe that you will be having many friends.
I\'m also happy that you\'re enjoying school. ^^
~Teacher Gina
Hi my name is [이름]!
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Hi, this is [이름]!
>> Or: Hi, I am [이름]!
I finished school late today.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My class ended late today.
I made 10 friends.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I was able to meet 10 new friends.
I had a class class with my teachers.
>> I had a class with my teachers.
>> Or: I attended a class with my teachers.
I learned about the teachers through the class.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I got to know more about the teachers because of the class.
The teachers were fun.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: The teachers were very enjoyable to be with.
I also learned about my friends.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I also got to know more about my friends.
I\'m happy because I went home with two friends.
>> I\'m happy because I went home with two of my friends.
I want to have many friends.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I want to gain many friends.
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