[이름]\'s Diary!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting another entry for today.
I\'m glad that you had an awesome day at school. ^^
~Teacher Gina
Hi, I am [이름]!!!
>> CORRECT.
My class not ended late today.
>> My class has not ended late today.
>> Or: My class did not end late today.
I also got to know more about my friends and teachers today.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I also learned more about my friends and teachers today.
My homeroom teacher is very kind and fun.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My homeroom teacher is very nice and fun.
Today as well, I come back home with two of my friends.
>> I also went home with two of my friends again today.
I was able to meet 5 new friends.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I met 5 new friends.
I was able to meet 2 new teachers.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I also met 2 new teachers.
My history teacher is very fun.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My history teacher is very interesting.
I want to again many friends.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I want to have many friends.
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