[이름]\'s Diary!!!

2019-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, I am [이름]!!! My class not ended late today. I also got to know more about my friends and teachers today. My homeroom teacher is very kind and fun. Today as well, I come back home with two of my friends. I was able to meet 5 new friends. I was able to meet 2 new teachers. My history teacher is very fun. I want to again many friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Thank you for submitting another entry for today.

I\'m glad that you had an awesome day at school. ^^


~Teacher Gina



Hi, I am [이름]!!!

>> CORRECT.

 My class not ended late today.
>> My class has not ended late today.

>> Or: My class did not end late today.


 I also got to know more about my friends and teachers today.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I also learned more about my friends and teachers today.


 My homeroom teacher is very kind and fun.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: My homeroom teacher is very nice and fun.


 Today as well, I come back home with two of my friends.
>> I also went home with two of my friends again today.


 I was able to meet 5 new friends.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I met 5 new friends.

 I was able to meet 2 new teachers.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I also met 2 new teachers.

 My history teacher is very fun.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: My history teacher is very interesting.


 I want to again many friends.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I want to have many friends.

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