[이름]\\\'s Diary!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thanks for submitting your entry for today.
I truly appreciate it. ^^
I\'m glad that you had a wonderful day in school.
~Teacher Gina
Hi, I am [이름]!
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Hi, my name is [이름]!
>> Or: Hi, this is [이름]!
My class ended late today.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My class was finished late today.
>> Or: We had a late class dismissal today.
I also learned more about my friends and teachers today.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I got to know more about my friends and teacher today.
My friends is very interesting.
>> My friends are very interesting.
I met 1 new friend.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I met a new friend.
I also met 1 new teacher.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I met a new teacher.
My P.E teacher is girl.
>> My P.E teacher is a girl.
>> Or: My P.E teacher is a female.
My favorite subject is P.E because P.E is very interesting and fun.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I like the P.E subject the most because it is very interesting and fun.
Also my P.E teacher is interesting and fun.
>> My P.E teacher is also interesting and fun.
I want to have many friends.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I want to gain many friends.
I also want to have many teachers.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I also want to meet many teachers.
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