[이름]\\\'s Diary!!!

2019-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, i am [이름]! My class ended late today. I also learned more about my friends and teachers today. My friends is very interesting. I met 1 new friend. I also met 1 new teacher. My P.E teacher is girl. My favorite subject is P.E because P.E is very interesting and fun. Also my P.E teacher is interesting and fun. I want to have many friends. I also want to have many teachers.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!


Thanks for submitting your entry for today.

I truly appreciate it. ^^

I\'m glad that you had a wonderful day in school.


~Teacher Gina



Hi, I am [이름]!

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: Hi, my name is [이름]!

>> Or: Hi, this is [이름]!

 My class ended late today.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: My class was finished late today.

>> Or: We had a late class dismissal today.


 I also learned more about my friends and teachers today.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I got to know more about my friends and teacher today.


 My friends is very interesting.

>> My friends are very interesting.

 I met 1 new friend.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I met a new friend.


 I also met 1 new teacher.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I met a new teacher.


 My P.E teacher is girl.

>> My P.E teacher is a girl.

>> Or: My P.E teacher is a female.

 My favorite subject is P.E because P.E is very interesting and fun.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I like the P.E subject the most because it is very interesting and fun.


 Also my P.E teacher is interesting and fun.
>> My P.E teacher is also interesting and fun.


 I want to have many friends.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I want to gain many friends.


 I also want to have many teachers.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I also want to meet many teachers.

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