[이름]\'s homework 12

2018-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

1) The moon was out late last night. 2) Jessica pulled out her first tooth this morning. 3) My entire family were the flu last winter. 4) The employees were a lot of work today. 5) The swimmer swam their breath and jumped in the water. 6) The baker baked a cake for my birthday. 7) They took a picture of the mountain. 8) The teacher taught the students chemistry last year. 9) I brought my jacket to work yesterday. 10) We went to the zoo last weekend.

강사 첨삭

Hey there [이름]!(\",)

I\'m sorry I think I made a mistake. I accidentally deleted the verbs in the sentences. It was really hard to answer the homework yesterday, right? I\'ll make it up to you today. I\'ll give you something really easy. I\'m sorry again.

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

1) The moon was out late last night.

>> correct!
 2) Jessica pulled out her first tooth this morning.

>> correct!
 3) My entire family were the flu last winter.

>> My entire family caught the flu last winter.
 4) The employees were a lot of work today.

>> The employees did a lot of work today.
 5) The swimmer swam their breath and jumped in the water.

>> The swimmer held their breath and jumped in the water.
 6) The baker baked a cake for my birthday.

>> correct!

OR>>The baker MADE a cake for my birthday. 
 7) They took a picture of the mountain.

>> correct!
 8) The teacher taught the students chemistry last year.

>> correct!
 9) I brought my jacket to work yesterday.

>> correct!

OR>> I WORE my jacket to work yesterday.
 10) We went to the zoo last weekend.

>> correct!

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