[이름]\'s homework 14

2018-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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OMG!!!! I didn\'t my homework! ... Teacher.. I\'m sorry... 1) I dream about my favorite person. 2) I think about my life. 3) I am afraid of the darkness. 4) I am interested in watching game. 5) On the weekends I like to watch movie.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!(\",)

You are so cute. Don\'t worry sweetheart, it\'s okay. You did an excellent job again. Keep it up!(\",)

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

1) I dream about my favorite person.

>> correct! (Who is your favorite person?)

OR MAYBE YOU SHOULD HAVE SAID>> I dream about meeting BTS in person.
 2) I think about my life.

>> correct!
 3) I am afraid of the darkness.

>> I am afraid of the dark.
 4) I am interested in watching game.

>> I am interested in watching games.
 5) On the weekends, I like to watch movie.

>> On the weekends, I like to watch movies.

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