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Q:Was 2019 a good year for you? in what way or why not?
2019 was a very special year for me and there are some reason mede the year 2019 special.
I had worked for China branch for 5 years and 2019 is the year I came back to Korea. Even though I enjoyed life in China, I could not deny I feel much more confortable when I am in Korea, where my parents and most of friends live.
Moreover, there are full of amazing moment with my children. After work when I open the door of home, my kids are hurry to come to me and ask me hug them. It makes me happy.
For these reasons, I think 2019 is a very good year for me and I wish comming year 2020 would be better.
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2019 was a very special year for me and there are some reason mede the year 2019 special.
>>>The year 2019 is very special for me and there are some reasons which made it special.
I had worked for China branch for 5 years and 2019 is the year I came back to Korea.
>>>I worked in China branch for 5 years and 2019 was the year I came back to Korea.
Even though I enjoyed life in China, I could not deny I feel much more confortable when I am in Korea, where my parents and most of friends live.
>>>Even though I enjoyed my life in China, I could not deny how I much more comfortable I feel when I am in Korea, where my parents and most of my friends live.
Moreover, there are full of amazing moment with my children.
>>>Moreover, there were full of amazing moments with my children.
After work when I open the door of home, my kids are hurry to come to me and ask me hug them.
>>>After work when I open the door of my house, my kids would hurry to come to me and asked me hug them.
It makes me happy.
>>>It made me happy.
For these reasons, I think 2019 is a very good year for me and I wish comming year 2020 would be better.
>>>For these reasons, I think 2019 was a very good year for me and I wish this coming 2020 would be better.
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