[이름]'s hw

2018-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I think that your topic is very difficult.^^ I can't understand the question well,because I'm not good at reading. Anyway, if my translation is right,I'll try write from now. Nowadays there are many digital things. It is useful to many people. But it is hard to use to old people. For example, there are touch screen at fast food store. The machine need not chashier. Only customer touch the order screen by themself. But most of old people can't use this machine well. They need another helpness. Fast technology can improve life many people. But people have to chase as much as develope speed technology.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름] :)

Oh I see, from now on, I\'ll try to give you easier ones~

Anyhow, the question was asking whether it is good for your children to be exposed to technology at a very early age.

Thanks and see you later!

I think that your topic is very difficult.^^

>>CORRECT!
 I can\'t understand the question well, because I\'m not good at reading.
>>CORRECT!
Anyway, if my translation is right,I\'ll try write from now.
>>
Anyway, if my translation is right, I\'ll try to write from now.
Nowadays there are many digital things.

>>CORRECT!

 It is useful to many people. But it is hard to use to old people.

>>It is useful to many people, but it is hard to use for old people.

For example, there are touch screen at fast food store.
>>CORRECT!
The machine need not chashier.

>>The machine does not need a cashier.

Only customer touch the order screen by themself.

>>The customers only touches the order screen by themselves.
 But most of old people can\'t use this machine well.
>>However,
most old people can\'t use this machine well.

They need another helpness.

>>They need help.
 Fast technology can improve life many people. But people have to chase as much as develope speed technology.

>>Fast technology can improve the lives of many people, but people have to chase after the speedy technology development.


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