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Hi there, [이름]^^

I am so happy because you finally have two families to guide you through whatever you experience in life.

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Before I got married there was one family on me.
>>Before I got married, I only had one family.
After I got married I had two families.
>>After I got married, I have two families.
Sometimes family is power of life or cage of love but sometimes it is make hard me and one of worries .
>>Sometimes, family is the power of life or cage of love but sometimes it is hard for me and is also one of my worries.
 Because parents are old and be wekened.
>>It is because parents are old and can be weakened.
My parents have worked for their livehood. But my parents in law didn\'t work for a long time.
>>My parents have worked for their livelihood, but my parents-in-law didn\'t work for a long time.
Because my husband worked for his family for a long time.
>>The reason is that my husband worked for his family for a long time.
Even though we got married ,he is supplying for his family livehood.
>>Even though we got married. he is still providing for his family livelihood.
Of course my parents in law is my parents, too. So I don\'t hate that.
>>Of course my parents-in-law are my parents too, so I don\'t hate that.
But sometimes I feel pitiful my husband.
>>However, I sometimes feel that my husband is pitiful.
When it happens, I think \"What is the family to us?\"

>> When it happens, I think \"What is family to us?\"