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Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your opinion.
I guess the most painful part of death is leaving our relatives or loved ones behind.
The truth that they can only hold onto our memories is what terrifies me most.
Enjoy your Monday and see you later!
Sudden death or unpredictable death are afraid of many people.
>>Many people are afraid of sudden or unpredictable death.
The reason that people are afraid of death is they don\'t know their future.
>>The reason why people are afraid of death is that they don\'t know their future.
There are no people who want death.
>>CORRECT!
I\'m not sure but the people who extremely suffered patient or hopeless can want their death.
>>I\'m not sure but the people who extremely suffered as a patient or hopeless can want their death.
This is just my thinking.
>> This is just my idea.
When people live many years and old , death is natural thing.
>> When people live many years and they are old , death is a natural thing.
Because we couldn\'t experience, we can be afraid the death.
>>Because we have not experienced it, we can be afraid of death.
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