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Thank you very much for this [이름]^^
I am so confident that your students remember you^^
When I was young, my Filipino language teacher taught me significant things in academics and real life.
I still remember her lesson to this day :)
There were many teachers for my student life.
>>There were many teachers during my student life.
Unfortunatly, I don\'t have any teacher who exists in my memory.
>>Unfortunately, I don\'t have any teacher who exists in my memory.
My teachers were just only people who teaches students
>>My teachers were just only people who teach students.
Of course they would tell many students that good wisdom and excellent teaching.
>>Of course they would tell many students about good wisdom and excellent teaching.
In my case, I try to my students not only teaching but personality education.
>>In my case, I try to teach my students not only academic teaching but also personality education.
Also I try to teach. When I hate study how I stand it or when I failed many times ,how I refresh me and so on.
>>I also try to teach when I used to hate studying, how I stand it or when I failed many times, and how I refreshed myself and so on.
I\'m not sure they remember me but I want to affect their life from time to time.
>>I\'m not sure if they remember me but I want to affect their life from time to time.
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