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Please explain this tomorrow: To possess it, people always have to try. (and need to some heritage?)
In everything that we do, balance is really important^^
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I think people who strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time don\'t exists mostly , except noble family.
>>I think people who strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time don\'t exist, except noble families.
Many people want to have happy family and successful life.
>>Many people want to have a happy family and a successful life.
To possess it, people have to try always and need to some heritage.
>>To possess it, people always have to try. (and need to some heritage?)
These days, Korea\'s economy is very hard. So it affects my husband business. So my husband is depressed.
>>These days, Korea\'s economy is having a hard time, so it affects my husband\'s business, and he is depressed.
My husband\'s hope is maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time.
>>My husband\'s hope is to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time.
He thinks the best of life is family.
>> He thinks the best in life is family.
But nowadays since the economy situration , he is very stressful.
>>But nowadays, due to the economic situation, he is very stressed.
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