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It is undeniable that fast food dishes like hamburger, French fries, and fried chicken are delectable~!
However, we should eat them in moderation^^
Have a great day, see you tomorrow!
I don\'t eat fast food well. When I\'m on the way go travel or sepcial day, I eat it.
>>I don\'t eat fast food well. When I\'m traveling or it\'s a special day, I eat it.
Of course, fast food tastes good.
>>CORRECT!
Before my husband was not married, he often ate it.
>>CORRECT!
Because he told that it provided very quickly and the food was simple.
>>Because he told me that it could be provided very quickly and the food was simple.
Not all people was fat and high cholesterol due to fast food.
>>Not all people are fat and have high cholesterol due to fast food.
But the pople who very often have a fast food are mostly fat and not health.
>>However, the people who often have fast food are mostly fat and not healthy.
Just in my think.
>>It is just my opinion.
It is not good what have a fast food very often.
>>It is not good to have fast food very often.
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