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Hi there, [이름] :)
Thank you for doing your homework~
In my case, I am not that patient, but I am doing my best to control my anger for my benefit and for other people, ha! ha!
See you^^
What make irritated me is rude or selfish people.
>>What makes irritated me are rude or selfish people.
I seldom angry.
>>I seldom get angry.
If I see such people who rude or selfish people , I can\'t endure angry.
>>If I see such people who rude or selfish, I can\'t endure anger.
For example, people who don\'t make a rule in public place or selfish in a office or work space.
>>For example, people who don\'t make a rule in a public place or are selfish in an office or working space.
My office need coworkship.
>>My office needs co-working.
Teachers have to talk each other about their student. Because students can change from this class to other class
>>Teachers have to talk to each other about their students, because students can change from one class to another.
So teachers have to chain system about their student. But selfish people don\'t share any opinion.
>>Therefore, teachers have to adopt a chain system about their students, but selfish people don\'t share any opinion.
And they act peremptorily.
>>Moreover, they act peremptorily.
These are reason why I\'m angry.
>>These are the reasons why I\'m angry.
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